Tuesday, December 8, 2015

SOL number 1

SOL #1 

The sand is so cold that it burns. My bare feet sting so bad,
 “ Oh my gosh, when is it going to warm up!?” 
“ I thought that the sand dunes are supposed to be hot!” 
we slowly trudge through the deep, shifting sand and slowly make our way up, up ,up to the highest dune. I open my mouth to talk but instead, I get a mouthful of sand and sputter.  When we get to the next point, we colapse, raise our frozen feet to the sky, and rest our heaving lungs. 
I so wish I had socks right now. 
“ everyone up!” 
(Groans) 
“ oh no, we have to go straight up hill now” 
(two hours later) 
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OGM 
WERE AT TEH TOP! 
“and im dead, no wait im going to run down the highest dune!” 
stupid idea by the way. 

But it was fun :)
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8 comments:

  1. Sofie RDecember 9, 2015 at 9:24 AM

    I remember this! Nice SOL :)

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  2. UnknownDecember 9, 2015 at 9:27 AM

    Nice story Grace. I remember a lot of other things from that trip too :)

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  3. UnknownDecember 9, 2015 at 1:53 PM

    I remember that. I was the lucky one with SOCKS!!! but I still have sand in them. Nice job!!!

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  4. UnknownDecember 9, 2015 at 3:50 PM

    Good dialogue. Is there any way you can make your text bigger?

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  5. UnknownDecember 10, 2015 at 9:07 AM

    Great line: "we colapse, raise our frozen feet to the sky, and rest our heaving lungs." Definitely a memorable morning!

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  6. UnknownDecember 10, 2015 at 12:27 PM

    I remember that, you really captured the moment well. Great job Grace!

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  7. MilesDecember 10, 2015 at 3:57 PM

    I remember that! You really convey what everyone was thinking well.

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  8. UnknownDecember 10, 2015 at 8:15 PM

    The way your voice comes through while describing that hike is excellent. The line about "raising frozen feet to the sky" is masterful!

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